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Punctuation Rule-r

She, with sharp features like an undone safety pin, slapped out the comma with her wooden ruler like a conductor's baton.


Hawk like she'd swoop on innocent charm over cringing shoulders and crack down wood on timber desks.


'That - needs - a - comma - or - full - stop', she would beat out, 'why - don't - you - listen - next - time?'


With that, penned knuckles were slapped with the flat side of 12 inch pine.


As tears of humiliation rolled down uncontrollably and spatted on neat fountain pen sentences, I would lose myself in the bleeding shape of blue ink as it blotted and blurred yet more of my fragile understanding.


Wiping away embarrassment, I vowed to use a sharp pencil next time and this not to rub out my mistakes, but hers!

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Jackie Kirman
Jackie Kirman
24 ביוני 2021

'She, with sharp features like an undone safety pin, slapped out the comma with her wooden ruler like a conductor's baton.' Wonderful line. Difficult memory too - what's interesting is that you manage to meld the shocking content with your wry wit

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